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Author Topic: Jenny's Return to Diapers: Chapter 4 Back to Diapers  (Read 20115 times)

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Jenny's Return to Diapers: Chapter 4 Back to Diapers
« on: October 04, 2008, 02:39:16 pm »

Chapter 4
Back to Diapers

   
Over the next few weeks Jenny continued to wear diapers both at home and at school.  Everyday it seemed that she was becoming more of a baby.  Her mother had thrown out all of Jenny’s underwear and most of her other clothes saying that she wouldn’t needing these anymore.  Around the house Jenny was allowed to only wear T-shirt and a diaper  Jenny found that her bed had been replaced with a crib filled with little stuffed animals.  Jenny’s chair at the dinner table had replaced with a high chair.  Instead of being allowed to eat normal food Jenny’s mom would spoon feed her a special formula baby food.  Jenny had hoped that her dad would put a stop to this madness but he only shrugged when he saw what his wife had done with their daughter saying, “It looks like I have got my little girl back.”
   
Jenny began wetting the bed more than ever.  Jenny would wake up to find her self sleeping in a yellow puddle with her diaper completely saturated.  Jenny to her horror found that  she would start wet herself and be completely unable to stop.  Jenny tried to use the bathroom but her mother had a put a lock on the door so she couldn’t use the bathroom unless mommy was around.  The only time when Jenny was allowed in the bathroom was when she was getting her diaper changed or was being given a bath by her mom.  When Jenny asked why she wasn’t allowed to use the bathroom her mother would turn to her and  say, “The bathroom is only for grownups, babies use their diapers.”  Eventually nature would have its way and Jenny would end up messing and wetting her diaper.  Her mom would then give her a diaper check and change her 18 year old daughter into a fresh diaper.
   
Jenny still continued to go to school.  In school Jenny would wet and mess her diapers just like an infant.  Jenny was aware of course when she had just had an accident but her bladder was so weak that she usually couldn’t tell when she was about to go in her diaper until after the fact.  All of Jenny’s teachers were told not to let her use the bathroom no matter what.  Everybody knew that Jenny wore diapers by her added bulk and the crinkling noise her diapers made.  She didn’t get teased to much as most of the students were mature enough not to make fun of what they believed was a medical condition.  A few jerks would ask her “Does little baby need her didees changed?” but that was about the extent of it.  
   
Every lunch period Jenny would to go to nurse Blanch’s office where she would get her diaper changed.  Nurse Blanch would have the cafeteria send up Jenny’s food making sure beforehand that Jenny’s food had been drugged with a special formula to ensure that she would continue to need to wear diapers.  Everyday  nurse Blanch would take off Jenny’s sopping wet diaper.  She would then lay her down on a changing mat making sure to thoroughly clean every crevice of her body.  Next nurse Blanch would rub Jenny’s loins area with baby oil before sprinkling her with baby powder.  Life continued along this routine for a few weeks.
   
One day Jenny’s mom said “Me and your father are going out this evening.  We have gotten you a baby-sitter who we think you are going to like.”
   
Jenny began to cry, “Mom, I don’t want a baby-sitter.  They are going to laugh at me!  Why can’t I stay home by myself, I’m 18 I’m not a baby and you can’t keep treating me like this!!”  Jenny was so mad as she yelled at her mom that she didn’t even notice as she peed in her already full diaper as her diaper began to leak.  Jenny’s warm pee escaped from the seal of her diaper and ran down her legs making a small yellow puddle where she stood.
   
“Oh no?  Well if your not a baby then how come your diaper is wet?”  Tammy asked her daughter as she slid her hand under her daughter’s diaper which sure enough was wet.  Jenny felt so humiliated having to have her diaper checked.  Every time she tried to assert her adulthood she felt all the more babyish as she stood their in her pissy wet diaper.  “Hank will you change her I have to get ready.”
   
“Sure thing dear.”  Hank had Jenny bend over his lap as he proceeded to change his daughter’s diaper.  “You be  a good daddy’s girl and don’t give the baby-sitter any trouble.  Right?”
   
“Yes daddy.”, Jenny murmured in a defeated manner.  Just as Jenny was in the middle of having her diaper changed the doorbell rang.
   
“That must be your baby-sitter.”, exclaimed  Tammy.
   
Tammy opened the door to greet the baby-sitter.  Jenny was still bent over her dad’s lap as he sprinkled baby powder over his daughter’s most private parts.  “Hey Jen its me!”.  Jenny recognized the voice and looked up to see that it was her best friend Lindsey but it was Lindsay’s companion that made Jenny want to crawl into a corner and bury her head in shame.
   
“Do you guys mind if I have Dave here to keep me company tonight?”, Lindsey asked Jenny’s parents.  Dave was Jenny’s former boyfriend.  Dave played on the varsity football team.  Both of Jenny’s parents thought that Dave was a great guy and had been disappointed when Jenny broke up with him.    They had broken up on good terms.  Dave was a nice guy who was in Jenny’s view sensitive to a fault.  Still Jenny felt ashamed of being seen by Dave like this.  When she had broken up with Dave she saw herself as a strong young woman.  Now she felt like a little baby girl who was  bent over her father’s lap getting her diaper changed.  Seeing Jenny like this was giving David a raging hard on.
   
“No, not all.”, said Jenny’s mom.
   
“How are you doing?”, Hank asked David as he finished pinning Jenny’s diaper on.
   
“Pretty good and you sir?”
   
“I’ve been busy working in the legislature.  I haven’t had much time to spend with my wife.  I am really glad you two are able to watch Jenny this evening.”   With that Jenny’s parents were gone to enjoy their evening.
   
“The first thing we need to do is to give baby her bath.”, Lyndsey said.
   
“I don’t want a bath!”, Jenny pouted.  “Come on Lyndsey don’t do this to me!”
   
“All babies need baths.  Especially big babies who still wear diapers.”
   
“No!!  I won’t let you give me a bath!  Your not my parents and I don’t have to do what you say!”, and with that Jenny turned her back and started running to escape her baby-sitter.
   
“Dave, go get her and bring her down here while I get the bath water ready.”
   
“OK.”  Dave easily caught up with Jenny.  Jenny tried to resist but Dave was easily able to overpower Jenny with little trouble.  As he scooped her up in his arms Jenny kicked and screamed but to no avail.  “What a bad little girl you are being”, said David in his deep voice.  “I think I might have to give you a spanking.”
   
“Please Dave, don’t spank me.”, Jenny cried.
   
Dave bent Jenny over his knee and pulled down Jenny’s diaper, exposing her beautiful ass but Dave being the soft hearted guy that he was couldn’t bring himself to spank his ex-girlfriend and so he relented.  “OK, I won’t spank you but you still have to be punished.”
   
“I do?”
   
“That’s right.  I sentence you to tickle torture.”  Dave gently poked Jenny’s vagina with his finger sticking it in a little ways while he tickled Jenny’s belly with his other hand. while Jenny squealed with delight.
   
“David is tickling me make him stop Lyndsey!”
   
“Dave stop picking on the poor baby.  She needs her bath.”
   
Jenny sat in the bath tub playing with her rubber ducky and splashing Dave and Lyndsey whenever she got the chance.  Lyndsey patiently endured Jenny’s childish behavior while she sponged and shampooed Jenny all over.
   
“You know Jenny,” Lyndsey said “babies aren’t supposed to have any hair down there.”  Jenny began to cry as Lyndsey and Dave got Jenny out of the tub and shaved  her last sign of maturity.  “Look at how smooth and soft you are now.”  Lyndsey cooed as she rubbed Jenny’s shaven pussy.  Jenny felt truly infantile as she stood naked with no body hair save for the beautiful long hair on her head.
   
After they had finished shaving Jenny Dave had to leave to get some homework done.  Jenny and Lindsey watched TV as Jenny was curled up with her head in Lindsey lap and went to sleep.  As Jenny slept Lindsey pulled Jenny’s head closer to her chest.  Lindsey removed her shirt and instinctively Jenny began to suckle on her best friends nipple.  As Jenny suckled  Lindsey placed her hand on the crotch of Jenny’s diaper and felt the warm liquid spread throughout her diaper.  Next Lindsey slipped her hand down the front of Jenny’s diaper and gently began to gently rub her clit.  Jenny woke up to find herself suckling on her best friend while Lindsey rubbed her to climax.  Jenny then put her own hands in her pissy wet diapers and began rubbing herself as her wriggled in orgasmic pleasure thinking to herself that she had never felt better.
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« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 03:11:04 pm »

I tried to read this, but wow. The grown-ups definitely cross the line into being cartoonishly evil. Are the used diapers of a teenage girl the power source for their Doomsday Machine?
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« Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 03:26:36 pm »

Wow. I smell a threesome in chapter 5.

Can't wait :?
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« Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 03:44:47 pm »

ok seriously i just dont know where to begin, i dont even know if i can constructively criticise this piece of well i dont know. even for a smut story this is bad.

ok ok im going to try and be positive, right first thing if you decide to write another story write with you head not your cock. think about your characters, think about who they are and how they function. ill be honest this story makes no sense, at all. it makes less sense then a thing thats whole purpose of being is to not make sense. infact it makes less sense then my previous sentence.

This is just stupid tho. when i read it in my head it was like listening to microsofts sam voice thing. the story lacks emotion, character and feeling.
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« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 04:31:47 pm »

I hate stories that are somewhat realistic at first, and then stretched to the point where you might question reality. No school nurse nor mother would do that to a child or teenager unless they were completely insane. Bringing lesbian action into this seemed like it was your primary goal to even write a story. The whole thing seemed too skippy, and too weird.
But, honestly, I do appreciate your hard work. I'll respect anything given an effort. =)
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« Reply #5 on: October 04, 2008, 07:35:54 pm »

Quote from: "someguy"
if you decide to write another story write with you head not your cock.


I couldn't agree more.

Dude, this story is so implausible it isn't even funny.
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« Reply #6 on: October 05, 2008, 04:28:50 pm »

Quote from: "someguy"
ill be honest this story makes no sense, at all.
it make perfect sence he writes the story as far as he can get before he give up and gets his rocks off then he ties it up roughly so it can be continued the following evening

Quote from: "y_cant_i"
But, honestly, I do appreciate your hard work. I'll respect anything given an effort. =)
i think you might find alot of effort went into this story even if it's the other sort of effort

Quote from: "kip"
Dude, this story is so implausible it isn't even funny.
well it is a little funny bit of a short fuse ^_^

and it's not like he didn't admit to it
Quote from: "Nylupian"
I am hoping to find something that I will find erotic.


on a side note does any one think it has anything at all in comon with this story?? http://abdlstoryforum.myfastforum.org/about583.html
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« Reply #7 on: October 05, 2008, 04:41:15 pm »

What I don't understand is, after getting so many less than positive reviews he still continues to post. If my work got booed this badly I probably would've taken it down by now. But ehh, freedom of expression and all that...
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« Reply #8 on: October 05, 2008, 04:59:56 pm »

to be honest there's an audience for it why else would D**ker, homestead and simmilar continue but you've got to know where to find your audience, what's more your less likely to continue if you get no posts than 4 or 5 bad ones because if no-one replies you assume no-ones reading if you get some bad comments you know it's being read probably by more people than are posting and those that don't get diggs in might be enjoying it
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« Reply #9 on: October 05, 2008, 06:13:13 pm »

I knew this story seemed familiar, thanks for pointing that out jay woulda bugged me for a second
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« Reply #10 on: July 03, 2009, 02:27:32 am »

I waiting til now to judge this story hoping it would get better with subsequent chapters but i see that wont happen. this story had great potential in the beginning but about halfway through chapter two it went downhill. i suggest scrapping this and trying again with more depth and some believable characters.
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« Reply #11 on: July 03, 2009, 11:06:13 am »

It seems they are overly cruel to poor Jenny.  Sorry, I can't get into this.  I did learn how to get a response to a story on this forum.

Recommend that Jenny fight back and win.  Her father works for the legislature?   That would be a pretty good opening to blackmail her way out of this.  I am torn between being horrified by what is happening to Jenny.

You're writing is technically good, but you are doing more telling than showing.  Start showing.

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Jenny still continued to go to school.  In school Jenny would wet and mess her diapers just like an infant.  Jenny was aware of course when she had just had an accident but her bladder was so weak that she usually couldn’t tell when she was about to go in her diaper until after the fact.  All of Jenny’s teachers were told not to let her use the bathroom no matter what.  Everybody knew that Jenny wore diapers by her added bulk and the crinkling noise her diapers made.  She didn’t get teased to much as most of the students were mature enough not to make fun of what they believed was a medical condition.  A few jerks would ask her “Does little baby need her didees changed?” but that was about the extent of it.

That paragraph needed to be expanded by ten.  I will do a little of it:
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That day in school Jenny sat bored in Mrs. Jones' class.  That teacher could go on and on talking about something that happened two hundred years ago.  When was she going to use the Monroe Doctrine?

Her crotch suddenly felt warm; she was wetting her diaper.  She didn't even feel the need to pee.  Even worse, she still had to poop.  It came on suddenly and it was urgent.  "Mrs. Jones?"  She waved her hand.  "May I go to the restroom?"

"You're wearing a diaper, Jenny.   You mother said you don't need to use the bathroom."  Her teacher seemed oblivious to the giggles of her classmates as she turned to the blackboard and continued teaching about the Monroe and John Quincy Adams.

Five minutes later, Jenny pooped her diaper.  She really had no choice: it was coming whether she wanted it to or not."  The smell filled the room.  She received sympathetic looks from a few of her classmates until Harvy Ellison yelled out, "Eww, does little baby need her didees changed?"  Jenny's face felt flushed and she knew her face was as red as her red Jansport.  She had to sit in the smelly diaper until class was over and Nurse Blanche could change her.  She couldn't wait for this humiliation to end.

End snippet

She how much more full of  feeling this has.  Of course your story will be longer, but it will be much more pleasurable to read.
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« Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 10:33:55 am »

Quote from: "Raynar Brusk"
I tried to read this, but wow. The grown-ups definitely cross the line into being cartoonishly evil. Are the used diapers of a teenage girl the power source for their Doomsday Machine?

That would make such an awesome story.
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