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  • PoopyPants82
    Reply to Untitled Nappy Girl Story (Updated and edited 12 Jan 20)
    by PoopyPants82
    Great stuff so far! I hope you keep at it!
    01-18-2020, 02:50:56 PM
  • Pierry
    Reply to Chapter 15 and 16
    by Pierry
    Good chapter now we can see why his mother is so calm about his potty training!! I hope you don’t take so long to post next chapter...
    01-17-2020, 09:44:40 PM
  • Penguin
    Reply to How do I post a story?
    by Penguin
    Ah, the first problem shouldn't happen from now on. Your account just hadn't been promoted to the user group that permits posting without moderation yet. You should have full editing access now to all your posts. If not let me know.

    As for your other issue, I'm guessing you write in MS Word, right? It has this annoying feature where it shows there being whitespace between paragraphs when there really isn't. When you copy and paste into the forums you have to manually insert an extra...
    01-17-2020, 09:42:34 PM
  • PampersBoy
    Reply to How do I post a story?
    by PampersBoy
    I keep getting locked out of the stories I have posted and cannot make edits. Whenever I copy a story into a thread it always runs everything together and I end up going back several times to space my character's dialogue appropriately....
    01-17-2020, 04:18:41 PM
  • PampersBoy
    Chapter 15 and 16
    by PampersBoy
    I decided to switch this story to third party in an effort to better illustrate the character's feeling and situations.


    Chapter 15 Every good diaper has its limit

    Robbie was sleeping soundly as they arrived back at home, Nikki unbuckled him from his car seat and carried him upstairs. Nikki carried Robbie upstairs and laid him on their bed. His diaper was only a little damp, so instead of taking a chance on waking him, Nikki undressed him and tucked him in for the...
    01-17-2020, 01:15:16 PM
  • Mazamune
    Reply to Easter Bedwetting (part 2 completed)
    by Mazamune
    Hey !

    definitely got the same feeling reading this one as reading Nano's enchantment. Maybe a little less depth in this one for now but it's only the beginning.

    can't wait to read more soon.

    Thank you for your work.
    01-17-2020, 08:05:22 AM
  • Mazamune
    Reply to Only Babies Wear Those
    by Mazamune
    WOW !! This one is Genius !

    I found that there's anything needed in a short story:

    The naration is kept light but with everything you need to understand the world.
    The plot is awesome and the end permits to understand what seems odd in the rest of the story.

    Thank you for great work !!
    01-17-2020, 08:00:21 AM
  • ABAlex
    Reply to Karma
    by ABAlex
    (Note: the next part is far more kink based and dirty, and not neccessairly in the main plot)

    Anna's Dream

    No. It was worse. Sleeping was far, far worse.

    Anna crawled, whining, the tug of her leash and slap of the switch encouraging her forward down the road as people laughed at her. Sleeping was far worse.

    The witch had told her there were two parts of the payback for Karma. The first was that she burned off all the negative things she had done....
    01-16-2020, 11:06:17 PM
  • Huggied
    Reply to Easter Bedwetting (part 2 completed)
    by Huggied
    Keep up the good work. I’m enjoying your story....
    01-16-2020, 06:41:05 AM
  • Mazamune
    Reply to (INCOMPLETE) When all else fails. A diaper dimension tale (CH 22 1/13/20)
    by Mazamune
    Hi !
    thanksfor the update on your story. It shows a nice potential but 2 things kind of bother me in your writing especially since your character enter the DD.

    As it was said by others before the story seems a bit rushed and particularly character development and in consequence I found that it lacks the depth it deserves.

    Secondly there a bit too much parts that just look like summarised/ rushed scenes and details from Exchange post in this forum.

    ...
    01-16-2020, 04:37:38 AM

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