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    The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    This is my first attempt at a TG fiction piece. Obviously not the target of this forum but I would love some feedback if anyone's interested.

    Day one


    When their family was getting ready for their annual ski trip Chris’s mom had bought him a new pair of long underwear. When he tried them on he couldn’t help but notice how they clung to his legs. “Mom they make me look like I have chicken legs!” Chris had always had a small frame and had been teased for it in the past.

    “It’s not as if anyone’s going to see your legs Chris. You’ll be wearing your ski pants. They’re just long johns.”

    “But what about in the chalet?”

    “Well I never expected you to wear them on their own, wear some sweatpants over them if you think you’ll need to take your ski pants off.”

    “Right.”

    “Go make sure your sister is packing”

    On his way back to his room Chris knocked on his older sister’s door. “Yeah what?” His sister Kathryn opened the door and saw her brother. “Why are you wearing leggings?”

    “They’re not leggings, they’re long johns for the trip. Anyway mom wanted me to make sure you were almost packed. Are you seriously bringing a suitcase that big?”

    “Whatever you say, looks an awful lot like leggings to me and yeah I’m almost ready. I’ve gotta be ready for any eventuality there could be cute boys there I have to have lots of dresses and stuff for the evenings and dresses means shoes and lots of make up even a couple hair extensions in case I want to change things up, a couple swimsuits in case I get invited hot tubbing.”
    As he went back to his room to finish packing Chris felt even more self-conscious. He finished packing making sure he had pants to wear skiing over his long underwear.

    In a short time they had loaded the car and were off. They arrived in a few hours at the lodge they usually rented. The family all piled out of the car and into the lodge.

    “You’ve got a few hours before the lifts close, why don’t you guys hit the slopes for while. Your mom and I will unpack the groceries.” Chris’ dad told the two kids.

    Chris and Kate got ready. Chris making sure to put his track pants over his long johns before putting on his ski pants and boots.
    Chris and Kate headed out to the slopes. For siblings they got along fairly well. Kate was 20 and went to college close to home. She was quite pretty and had been reasonably popular around school, a cheerleader and volleyball player. She knew her brother didn’t have a lot of friends so she was nice enough to him and even let him sit with her at lunch in school now and then when they had been in high school together. Chris was 18 and what a lot of people would call a nerd. He enjoyed Dungeons and Dragons with his few friends as well as being interested in Star Wars, Lord of the Rings and the like. He was part of the local swim team and was pretty good despite his small frame as his muscles were toned; he was actually shorter than his sister. (The swim team was in offseason now so his hair was longer than the brush cut he kept when he was swimming 6 days a week)

    Their family had been taking this ski trip for as long as Chris could remember so they were both quite good. To warm up they went a few times down a couple of the easier runs. Eventually hitting a black diamond before heading into the chalet. They propped their skis up outside and headed inside pulling off the rest of their gear and hanging it up in lockers. They ordered hot chocolates before sitting down in the lounge. They had both worked up quite a sweat and were chugging water while they waited for their hot chocolate. “See anyone you know around?” Chris asked Kate.

    “Can’t say I do, most of my friends are gone to the beach this year for spring break. Your track pants are all sweaty, you know you don’t have to be so worried about your long underwear, see all the guys around here are wearing Under Armor compression pants and stuff.”

    Chris looked around and realized that the new trend seemed to be wearing these sorts of compression pants and almost everyone was wearing them. A lot of the girls were wearing spandex leggings and a lot of guys were too though some were wearing track pants like Chris. “Yeah I guess it’s not that big of a deal is it. It’s not that different from my swim team shorts, just longer.”

    “Exactly, besides it looks like you sweat all the way through your track pants, maybe one layer too many don’t you think?”

    “Yeah I guess.” They received their hot chocolates and drank them, chatting about the rest of the trip. There was a concert on the weekend featuring a band they both liked so they bought tickets before heading back to the lodge for dinner with their parents. They ate their supper, showered and headed to bed, as they were pretty tired.
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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    The first thing I will say is a simple mechanical fix. Space out your paragraphs. I know that Renko has said many times that modern versions of MS Word add "fake" new lines that don't jive well with the forum so I won't blame you blindly, but fix the spacing regardless. If the chapter were much longer than it is I wouldn't have been able to muster up the mental fortitude to read it in its current wall-of-text form.

    You seem to have a well-defined mental image of your characters as far as their behavior, appearances, and interests lie. However, you're giving us way too much at once and doing it too directly. You want your characterization to evolve organically, rather than giving us info dumps. As much as I dislike it (simply due to its overuse), the phrase "Show, don't tell" comes to mind here.

    Moreover, the pace you're going at right now is much too fast. In one "chapter" we've gone from packing for the trip to the end of the day. You're racing through events without giving us time to digest them. If you spaced them out and expanded upon them, you would have ample opportunities to insert more narration and details about things that occur in between these points.

    Your grammar and general writing technique seem to be fine according to my (admittedly very cursory) read-over, so focus on the above points. Hopefully my suggestions are enough to tide you over until one of our resident authors replies to this, as I'm sure they can do a much better job than I can.

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    I completely agree. I like the basic set-up of the story and the two main characters seem likable enough as well, but you are really rushing. Shinra's advice here is excellent. In addition, something perhaps small that bothered me (as a longtime high school teacher): At what point in the year do you find a time hen swim team has been 'out of season" long enough for a swimmer to grow his hair long and yet it's somehow still winter? Where I live, high school swim has two seasons: Oct-Dec and Jan-Mar. So I'm confused...

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    The swim team bit being in offseason was kind of a throw away comment to explain why he had long hair but I guess people wouldn't really pick up on it that much unless they're reading well into the story. Having hair longer than a brush-cut is necessary for further along in the story I suppose he could just as easily have long hair and wear a cap, I know very little about swim teams to be perfectly honest.

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    Quote Originally Posted by Alliebee View Post
    The swim team bit being in offseason was kind of a throw away comment to explain why he had long hair but I guess people wouldn't really pick up on it that much unless they're reading well into the story. Having hair longer than a brush-cut is necessary for further along in the story I suppose he could just as easily have long hair and wear a cap, I know very little about swim teams to be perfectly honest.
    Most male swimmers choose to cut their hair pretty short for aerodynamics. :-) Maybe just have him run track and cross-country?

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    You could have simply said that he let it grow out. Don't they have those caps and whatnot for swimming?
    But you don't need to explain that in full. For example, you could say he was on the swim team, and you could later have a quick mention that he tosses his hair back before donning a winter cap. People who know anything about swim teams will fill in the blanks, but people who don't, will never miss a thing.

    And ShinraS pretty much covers most of it.
    Show, don't tell.
    Another example is that you could simply show his sister being nice, and him being appreciative of it. This will imply a reason for appreciating it, since he would probably take her kindness for granted, if he were in the same social status as she. As for pointing out that he's a nerd, again, show. It's not hard to spot a 'nerd' as they usually exhibit a certain type of behavior, or show certain interests. Hell, this applies to most everyone. If you take the time out to craft the characters actions according to who they are, it'll show, and you won't have to tell.

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    Day 2: Meeting Someone

    I probably haven't done much better a job of showing, not telling in this chapter, this is something I have struggled with since my high school english classes so I honestly don't know how much improvement will happen 10 years later haha. Anyway, without further ado I give you chapter 2.


    The next morning the family all got up and ate a big breakfast. Chris went to get ready for a full day of skiing, “Mom, my long johns are still damp from last night they got all sweaty. I can’t wear them today.”


    “Just wear your sweatpants.”


    “They make me, well, they make me sweat too much. That’s why my long johns are still damp.”


    “I don’t know what to tell you son,” His dad said as Chris looked to him, on his way up to his room to look for something to wear he stopped by Kate’s room.
    “Don’t wait for me Kate I have to put my long johns in the dryer.”


    “I don’t wanna ski with mom and dad, don’t you have something else to wear? Can’t you just keep your pyjama pants on”


    “No, I only had the one pair of long johns, and anything extra will make me crazy sweaty again.” Kate opened the bedroom door she was wearing neon green spandex leggings and a black long sleeved top, her brown hair in a braid down her neck.


    “Our legs are close to the same length you haven’t got the same uh… shape as me but leggings don’t have any shape either so give these a try.” Kate handed Chris a pair of purple spandex leggings.


    “You don’t have any other colours that are less girly?” Kate held up neon pink and an even brighter purple as well as bright blue and a pair of yellow. Chris took the blue ones only to realize they had pink stars and hearts dotted all over them.


    “Sorry bro I guess not really.” Chris finally took the yellow ones and went to get dressed. The yellow leggings made him feel like he had even more chicken like legs. He got his ski pants boots and coat on and headed with the rest of the family to the slopes.


    He had to admit he could move and ski a lot easier without another layer on his legs. Like last night he and Kate stuck together. They warmed their way up to the harder runs and were pretty hungry by the time they quit for lunch. They left their skis outside the lodge and headed indoors to get out of their gear. Chris went to the bathroom when they got inside. Kate was by a locker getting out of her coat when a tall handsome guy came up and started talking to her. He had long hair and a beard that was wet with snow. His name was Jordan and he was around Kate’s age. Kate asked him to ski with her after lunch but he had to decline her invitation because he couldn’t leave his brother by himself all afternoon. Jordan introduced his brother when he came to the locker, Jamie was 18 and tall not unlike his brother but a little skinnier, the other difference was Jamie was clean-shaven.
    “You don’t have a girl friend or a sister perchance?” Jordan asked.
    “No I’m just here with my brother.” Kate said.
    “Well maybe if I can find someone Jamie can ski with I’ll catch up with you.” Jordan and Jamie headed off to get something to eat.


    Chris came out of the rest room and got out of his ski gear. He bent over to get undo his ski boots and Kate couldn’t help but notice that Chris had more shape than she thought. He was happy to have gone with the leggings he didn’t feel out of place at all. They headed to the lounge and ordered lunch.


    “So I met someone when you were in the bathroom.”


    “Oh you mean like a guy?”


    “Yeah, he’s super cute too. He’s right over there.” Kate pointed to Jordan across the lounge


    “Feel free to ditch me, you were nice enough to stay with me this long.”


    “Don’t worry he won’t ditch his brother for me, unless he’s got a girl to hang out with too.”


    Chris brushed his hair off his forehead. “Oh, sorry about that then sis.” They ate their lunch and headed back to the slopes and skied again into evening. Kate caught occasional glimpses of Jordan and Jamie skiing and watched them longingly. Chris couldn’t help but notice that Kate seemed a little disinterested in skiing and was watching this guy Jordan she had talked about. The brother was a good skier too they were always racing, trading places with each other.


    They headed back to their lodge and met their parents for dinner. While they were eating their parents told them that there was urgent business back home with the real estate company that required their attention. There was no reason Kate and Chris couldn’t stay alone the lodge was already paid for. They left a credit card with them for emergencies and left after supper.
    Chris and Kate did the dishes and then washed up and got ready for bed. After showering Chris knocked on Kate’s door.


    Chris was wearing his pyjama pants and an undershirt. Kate answered her door wearing an oversized t-shirt with her wet hair wrapped up in a towel. “So I was thinking.”


    “Thinking about what?”


    “Your little predicament with that guy you met and the brother”


    “Yeah what about it?”


    “Well is there anything I could do to help?”


    “Unless you think you can appeal to a macho teenage guy I doubt it.” Then a light bulb went off in Kate’s head. “Say I have an idea, it’s a bit extreme but I think it could work.” Chris gave Kate a bit of a concerned look.


    “I was thinking more along the lines of just hanging out with the guy.”


    “Yeah well you’d be hanging out with him, but I have a feeling he’d prefer to have a companion of the fairer sex.”


    “Well how am I supposed to help with that?”


    “It wouldn’t take too much.”


    “Too much what?”


    “Work to make you like a girl”


    “Wait you want me to be a girl?”


    “Sure, you’re small enough, we’re close to the same size. We just need to pick up a few things at the mall.”


    “huh?”


    “Well your ski gear isn’t exactly feminine. Plus we can just use mom and dad’s card.”


    “I guess, I mean you’ve done a lot for me since I got to high school, I’d be in nerd hell without you.”


    “Great we’ll start in the morning.” Chris was tired so even though he had a lot on his mind he fell to sleep quickly.

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    I hope there is a good sale. Girls' ski clothes (ANY ski clothes) are expensive!

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    Here's the next chapter, again feedback is appreciated!
    Day 3 Transformations and doubts
    “Come on get up we need to go so we don’t waste the whole day.” Kate pulled the covers off of Chris. You’ll fit most of my clothes with no issue. Plus you’ll be in ski gear the whole time. “Here put these on,” Kate gave Chris a bundle of clothes.


    He looked thru the clothes. “Uh I don’t need these do I?” He held up a pair of underwear and a sports bra.


    “The bra definitely, I guess you can wear your own underwear if they won’t show too much. We’re going out in public you have to have some kind of bra. Plus a sports bra explains your flat chest.” Chris blushed and pulled the sports bra on over his head then the top Kate had given him. It was a long pink baseball style t-shirt that had princess written across the front of it and then the pink and blue leggings he had refused to wear yesterday. It was easy to see the lines of his boxer briefs underneath so he reluctantly stepped into the panties. He looked in the mirror in the closet.


    “Uh I don’t think I look like much of a girl Kate.” He called down the hall.


    “Come here.” She called to her brother. She looked him over when he came in the room. “You’re not doing so bad really, the swimming has given you a nice butt, that’s a good foundation and you’ve got great legs, the leggings only help that. Now, have a seat here.” Kate motioned to a chair by the desk in the room where she had her make up arranged. “Just close your eyes this will only take a few minutes.” First Kate clipped in the hair extensions and styled them. Making snips here and there to make them more natural looking. She’d picked up a few pointers from her aunt who was a hair stylist and you could hardly tell this wasn’t actually Chris’s hair. Then she applied the make up nothing aggressive but eyeliner, eye shadow and mascara were a must, plus a little bit of contouring of his jaw and cheeks. A few minutes later when she told Chris to open his eyes he barely recognized himself.


    “Wow you really did the job didn’t you? I guess I can’t go by Chris now can I?”


    “I guess you could. Now I already told Jordan I don’t have a sister so I guess my brother went home with my parents and let’s say you’re the daughter of mom and dad’s business partner. You can be Kristen or and still be Kris for short.”


    “Right,” Chris nodded nervously.


    “Let’s go, there’s a cab coming.” Kate gave Chris one of her sweaters and he pulled on his Blundstone boots, while Kate put on a pair of Uggs and her jacket. She gave Chris a small handbag to carry “You can put your phone and wallet in here.” The pair got into the cab and headed for a mall in the city not far away.


    The first thing they did was use the credit card to draw out a good deal of cash. This was Chris’ suggestion as he wasn’t overly enthused about their parents knowing about the shopping they were about to do. Then they went to a sporting goods store. They got Chris a new ski jacket and new ski pants. The ladies mediums were the perfect size, he was typically a man’s small. The coat was what Kate called magenta, Chris just saw it as pink and the ski pants were turquoise. Chris’ current ski goggles helmet, and boots would work fine. “There’s a couple other things I need to grab, you can just browse around.” Kate disappeared and Chris kept looking around the sports store, at the skis and other gear for about a half an hour until Kate came back. “Here put these on.” She handed him a pair of Uggs that matched her own and put his boots into a shopping bag.


    “What’s in the rest of the bags?”


    “Just a few things for just in case scenarios. I don’t think we’ll need most of it to be honest but you never know. Take this now though.” She gave him a new case for his phone it was purple and sparkly. “The Star Wars case might give you away.”


    “Right.” Chris blushed He changed the phone cases out and put the phone in the pocket of his new jacket. They took the shopping bags and got in a cab back to their lodge. He left his own phone case on the dresser and they got ready.


    “I texted Jordan they’re going to meet us in the lounge after lunch.” Chris was wearing a pink tuque and the hair extensions were framing his face nicely. “Here let’s wipe some of the eye make up off you won’t need so much with the ski goggles on. No girl wears that much makeup skiing. Plus I think the clothes and hair will do most of the job anyway. Oh and these.” She gave him a pair of her own gloves that matched his new ski pants along with a neck wrap which Chris pulled over his head carefully so as not to disturb the hair extensions. “With your face half covered he won’t ever be able to tell.” They got ready and headed out to the lounge carrying their ski gear wearing their Uggs rather than their ski boots. When they got to the lounge Kate waved Jordan over. “This is my friend Kristen, she’s my parents’ partner’s daughter.”


    “Where is your brother I thought you were here with him too?” Jordan asked.


    “He went home with my parents, they were called away for work so me and Kris here have the lodge to ourselves.”


    “So it’s just the four of us then.” Jamie the younger brother said as he shook Kristen’s hand. Kris gave Kate a hard look getting pretty nervous.


    “Now don’t go easy on us on the slopes we’re good skiers for girls, we’ve been at this as long as we remember,” Kate said and they headed for the locker room and got all of their gear on. They made their way to the lift of a medium difficulty hill and paired off, Jordan and Kate and Jamie and Kris.


    They kept up with the boys ably as they made their way down the first hill of the afternoon. “Wow you guys are fast” Kris said when they got to the bottom. “You girls can keep up pretty good though.”


    “Thanks,” Kate and Kris said in unison, Kris doing his best to put on a girls’ voice.


    “You guys could almost be sisters” Jordan said. The two girls laughed nervously.


    “I’ve known her since she was in diapers, her and my brother were actually born within a week of each other. They even had birthday parties together for a few years.” Kris just laughed nervously.


    “Should we go for another run?” Jordan asked.


    “Of course.” Kris said improving on his female impersonation. They lined up at another the lift in pairs again.


    “You know I thought this was going to be a really boring week with my brother,” Jamie said to Kris on the lift. “I never thought I’d get to ski with a cute girl like you.” Kris blushed.


    “You’re just saying that. I bet you’ve got all kinds of girls back home.”


    “Nah not really, I’m actually kind of a nerd if I’m honest. I spend most of my time playing video games and watching sci-fi movies and TV.”
    Kris was taken by surprise and a little pleased they had at least something in common. “Oh really? You seem so athletic.”


    “Skiing is the only thing I’m really good at.”


    “Well you’re very good at that.”


    “Thanks you’re not half bad yourself. How ‘bout a bet?”


    “What kinda bet?”


    “Last to the bottom of the hill buys dinner?” Kris blushed realizing he was being asked out.


    “Sure.” When they got off the lift Jamie counted down and they were off. The race was a little touch and go. As they neared the bottom Kris could tell Jamie was holding up. So he got down low and blew past him. “Looks like dinner’s on you.” Kris greeted Jamie at the bottom of the hill with a snow plough. In similar fashion Jordan had just let Kate win a race in an obviously planned move by the boys.


    The foursome joined back up, “So it’s a double date then?” Kate asked having learned what had happened. Kristen blushed.


    “I guess so.”


    “You boys had better let us go and get ready then.” The girls got their stuff from the locker room at the chalet and headed back to the lodge.


    “What the heck have I done? I can’t go on a date with a guy, I mean I am a guy!”


    “I guess you were just too charming.” She winked at him. “Go get in the shower I’ll help you get ready,” She reached into the bathroom holding a razor. “Legs, armpits, all the rest just like swimming bub.” This was the eventuality that Kate had been shopping for just in case. She took the items out of a bag. A wig styled like Kris’ hair had been with the extensions. This was jut more likely to stay on properly, especially when it was glued down. Then there were the breast forms. Kate had gotten a fairly high end set though not too big, a modest B cup. They would be glued on and finally a prosthetic that would flatten Chris’ crotch simulating that of a woman. “Dry off when you’re done and come in. Put this on first.” She passed him the midsection piece. Chris blushed deep red.


    “What on earth?”


    “There was a shop for transgender folks at that mall, apparently it’s the only one of its kind in the country and they send stuff all over the world from online. I wasn’t expecting to get all of this but better safe than sorry right?”


    “Safe from what?”


    “Advances of course”


    Chris blushed again, “Advances?”


    “Romantic advances. This young fella could get a little fresh, we don’t want to blow the fun when we’ve got so much time left here.” Chris shimmied into the latex underwear, positioning himself so he’d be able to pee properly. Once it was on you could hardly see the seams the skin tones matched so well. These are next. I’ll help you out with this. Kate applied the glue to Chris’ chest as well as the breast forms and applied them to his chest the last thing was the wig which went on easily enough and was glued down. All of the appliances had the company’s patented invisible seam and now Chris had every appearance of a naked girl.


    “Wow this stuff works way better than I ever could have hoped. “Here These will fit perfect.” Kate handed Kris a lingerie set in baby blue lace.


    “What no thong?” Chris asked sarcastically holding up the panties.


    “I’d never put you through that torture. I don’t even wear those things” Chris stepped into them and pulled them on. He fiddled with the bra a while failing to get it on. “Here let me help you with that.” Kate put the bra on and hooked it in the back. “Damn I’ve almost done too well. You’re gonna look better than me. You even have a thigh gap. I laid an outfit on your bed I’m gonna go shower.”


    Kate showered, put on her robe and wrapped her hair up in a towel. and went to Kris’ room to check on her. She couldn’t help but laugh at the site of what was now her young friend Kristen rolling on the floor fighting with a pair of tights. “Need a hand?” Kris nodded. Kate took the tights and rolled them down to the feet. Pulling them up over Kris’ feet to his knees. “This is the easiest way to get these on. You can get them up the rest of the way I think.” Kris pulled the tights up the rest of the way settling them at her waist “And now the dress, think you can handle that while I get dressed?”


    “Yeah I should be able to manage, thanks.” Kate disappeared to her room and got dressed. Kris stepped into the dress, a navy blue number that came to her knee once it was on then reached for the zipper. She couldn’t reach it. So she went down the hall to Kate’s room. She walked in without knocking. She blushed deep red when she realized Kate was still only in her underwear doing her makeup. “Oh gosh I should have knocked.”


    “Don’t worry, we’re both girls here.” Kris blushed even more before turning around to show Kate the zipper. “I figured as much.” Kate did up the zipper. “wow you look good, I never thought it’d go this well.” Kate said slipping into her own dress, a black one identical to Kris’. “My turn,” Kate held up her hair and showed her back to Kris who then did up her zipper.


    “Damn we do look like sisters. I think this calls for a selfie!” Kris blushed once again but posed for the photo anyway.


    “This never gets out right?”


    “Of course not hun. Come on the boys will be here soon. Here put these on.” Kate gave Kris a pair of flats. “We’ll stay away from the heels for now.”


    “Good idea. Wait, for now?” Kate smiled. Stepping into a pair of heels. Then she helped Kris into a green wool coat and got another one in red.


    “Now here’s your purse it has the makeup you’ll need in it for touch ups as well as a couple other things all ladies keep in a purse. Kris took a look inside blushing when she saw feminine products, just as she closed the purse a car horn honked outside the house. “That’ll be them, should we go out or wait for them to come to the door?” Kris asked.


    “On a first date, we can go out.” The two ladies emerged from the house, locking the door behind them and went to the car. Jordan was driving and Jamie in the back, so they each got in alongside their guy.


    The guys were well dressed as well and Jamie greeted Kristen with a kiss on the cheek. They drove into town and stopped at a steak house not far from the mall they had visited earlier that day. The boys each pulled out chairs for the ladies and they sat down. They shared an appetizer and ordered drinks, just soda as none of them were old enough for alcohol. Then they each ordered steaks. Kris surprised the boys by ordering a medium rare 16 oz prime rib and then eating the whole thing along with a baked potato and a salad.


    “You gonna have room for dessert?”


    “Of course, skiing works up a big appetite,” Kris blushed.


    Jamie looked jokingly into his wallet. “I love a girl with a good appetite.” Kris smiled coyly.


    “So what do you do for fun?” Jamie asked.


    “Well I play video games and watch movies and stuff. I’m kind of an introvert.”


    “So what’s your favourite movie?”


    “Oh there are so many. I guess my favourite recent one is probably one of the newer Star Wars movies. I just love the strong female leads. But I like all the Star Wars movies.”


    “I like all the Star Wars movies too.” The more they talked the more interesting Jamie seemed. Had he not been dressed as a girl Chris felt like he and Jamie could have gotten on famously and been really good friends.


    “I need to powder my nose,” Kate said Kris was so deep in conversation she hardly noticed that Kate had stood up. “Come with me Kris? Earth to Kris?” Kris came to attention.


    “Oh yeah sure.” Kris got up.


    “Don’t forget your purse.” The ladies went to the restroom


    “You know in another life me and Jamie would probably have been friends. Kris almost went into the mens room before Kate took her hand and pulled her into the ladies’. “There’s no reason you can’t be friends now.”


    “Yeah I guess, I dunno it all just feels so dishonest.”


    “What he doesn’t know won’t hurt him will it? As far as he knows you’re just a pretty girl.” Kris started to do a bit of a dance. “Gotta go?” Kris nodded nervously. “It’s no big deal just pull up the dress and pull down the tights and panties. As long as you put the thing on right you shouldn’t have any trouble. Oh and don’t forget to use a seat cover.” Kris did as she was told and didn’t have any issues though she struggled with the paper seat cover nearly wetting herself trying to get it to sit properly. “Don’t forget to wipe.” Kris blushed as she did so, flushed and adjusted everything, straightening her dress as she left the stall. Kate was at the mirror applying new lipstick. Kris followed suit also adding some blush to her cheeks.


    “How’s that?” She asked Kate.


    “Not too bad, you’re a natural hun.”


    “Now it’s a first date so I don’t anticipate anything happening but you have no reason to be uneasy if he makes a move, you look perfect.”


    “Thanks Kate,” with that they left the restroom and headed back to the table. The boys had taken the liberty of ordering apple pie and ice cream for everyone.


    “Apple pie a la mode with ice cream anyone?” Jamie asked.
    The girls laughed knowing ‘a la mode’ meant that the pie comes with ice cream.
    They continued their conversations as they ate their dessert. Kris was very much enjoying Jamie’s company and was a little disappointed as they got in the car. The guys opened the car doors for the girls and helped them in. When they got back to the lodge the boys walked them to the door. “I had a great time” Jamie said “You’re not like any of the other girls I’ve been out with before.” This made Kris blush.


    “I’ve never been out with a guy like you either.” Kris said.


    “Say there’s this concert Friday night down at the chalet, would you wanna go?”


    “Kate and I already have tickets but we could definitely go together.”
    Sure the four of us again?” Kris turned to Kate who was kissing Jordan rather deeply. She blushed again and turned back to Jamie a question in her eyes. Jamie answered with a kiss of his own. Kris was taken by surprise at first but realized she was enjoying it and started to kiss back. After kissing a while the two pairs split apart. “We’ll see you tomorrow on the slopes?” Kate asked the boys.


    “Of course,” The boys replied and the girls headed inside.


    Kris kicked off her shoes sat on the couch in the living room a bewildered look on her face. “What’s wrong Kris?” Kate asked. “We just had a nice evening with two perfect gentlemen.”


    “Yeah they were great it’s just I’ve never felt this way before about another person and everything about it has been a complete lie.” There were tears in Kris’s eyes now and her makeup started to run.


    “I’m not gonna lie I can see you have feelings for this guy. Have you ever had feelings for a guy before?”


    “You mean am I gay? I’ve never thought so.”


    “Maybe Kristen has always been inside you, you know?”


    “You mean I’m actually transgender?”


    “Well you’ve taken to all this pretty naturally.”


    “I guess it’s possible but I’ve never felt like it before.”


    “Well I didn’t tell you this earlier, because I wasn’t sure how you’d feel, but the glue all of your stuff is applied with won’t come off for 24 hours. So maybe ride it out until tomorrow afternoon and see how you feel?”


    Kris was upset with Kate at first and it came out on her face, but decided she could go with it especially for 24 hours. “Uh ok I guess that will work, but what about Jamie?”


    “Well if you keep it up through tomorrow and you figure out the whole transgender thing that’s all you have to tell him. If he doesn’t appreciate that, you’ve figured out a big piece of your life and can be free to pursue other romances.”


    Kris blushed even more at all of these thoughts, she yawned. “I guess I should head to bed, unzip me?” Kris held her hair away from the zipper of the dress and Kate undid the zipper. Kate in turn showed Kris her back and held up her hair.


    “Come to my room I can get you some PJs.” The both stepped out of their dresses and carried them to the room in their tights. “Hang it up” Kate motioned to the closet and Kris did as she was told. “You can make up your mind but I usually don’t sleep in a bra.”


    “You know I’ve hardly noticed them, the breasts I mean, they feel natural.” Kate winked at her, Kris was fiddling with the strap trying to get the bra undone.


    “ They’re not too big I figured you’d start off small. We’ll work on that, practice makes perfect.” Kate said unhooking the bra. “Here take this.” Kate gave Kris an oversized t-shirt. she pulled it on then took off her tights.


    “ I don’t think I’d like it any bigger. That glue really is good huh? My hair hardly moved at all.”


    “The lady at the shop said it was the best for this stuff.”


    “With the boobs and a shapeless night shirt you pass almost perfectly, a few curves and you’d be set. I know this one transgender girl at the grocery store where I work she started the medication and she went from stick to curvy in like six months. Oh and don’t forget to wash your face, make up can be murder for the pores overnight.” Kate was rather scatterbrained at this point. Kris laughed as she headed to her room stopping at the bathroom to wash her face on the way. Looking in the mirror Kris could see what Kate meant and she realized that for a guy she made a pretty cute girl, she could see what Jamie saw in her. She got in bed and was fast asleep in very short order. She dreamt of skiing with Jamie and about what might happen in the lounge if they were doing a little after ski romancing.

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    Ah, would that miracle prosthetics such as these truly existed...

    Of course, IRL trans women are stuck with tucking and breast forms mostly held in place by bras...and a boutique TG store in a small mall in a ski village? I want to live in this world.

    Nicely done chapter, though.

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    Quote Originally Posted by kerry View Post
    Ah, would that miracle prosthetics such as these truly existed...

    Of course, IRL trans women are stuck with tucking and breast forms mostly held in place by bras...and a boutique TG store in a small mall in a ski village? I want to live in this world.
    Well two minor things wrong with that statement. There are breast forms that use glue and don't require a bra to keep them in place (although generally a good idea anyway), and there are in fact gaffs that will hide the bulge.

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    Re: The Annual Ski Trip: A gender change tale.

    True, but neither of these things will make one look like a naked girl (when wearing them and standing naked). :-)

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